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Lord of darness
post Nov 23 2004, 04:07 AM
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Well you all know I am insain but I figured I owuld give you some exsamples. Here is a story I wrote for german class and I am acully turning in tomarrow. (and I have a copy in german as well) if you are easlly confused or hate insanity tunr back now.

Once Lucky the leprechaun ran from the kids who hunted him for his sweet sweet lucky charms. Lucky ran until he came to a rainbow and tried to climb it in order to get to the saftey of his pot of gold. However the rainbow turned into Skittles and no matter how many magic marshmellow shapes Lucky used, nothing could stop him from tasting the rainbow. When Lucky regained conciousness he had nothing but a can of Sprite. The Sprite commanded him to "Obey your thirst!" and he went on a killing spree with the Hamburgeler and Trogdor the Burninator. After Lucky saited his insane thirst for human blood, he ate a Taco and went home. He lived happily ever after with the Taco Bell dog.

Happy End!


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post Nov 23 2004, 03:32 PM
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Whoah! I can't believe I didn't read your story before! I love it. I do think, however, that the "killing spree" needs a bit more detail. Not necessarily gorey detail, just a little more "who, what, when, where, how". Forget the "why". Does it really matter? I can totally believe the Hamburgler angle. He's meaner than he looks. If you would allow me the honor, I'd love to interject my personal take on to what I believe the Leprechaun was able to accomplish via the "Sprite". But only with your permission of course.

Before you hand in that comp, if you haven't done so already, make sure that when your instructor reads it, he or she never forgets your work. MAKE YOUR MARK! Kick ass, take names...and get out:)

PS-If you decide to re-write it, make sure the Hamburgler buys it in the end. He's got lot's of enemies. His demise would be somewhat welcomed by your readers. The Hamburgler goes back a couple of generations now. I'm just saying it might be high time...do it. DO IT!
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post Nov 23 2004, 04:11 PM
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Ahh but if you were truly insane you wouldn't know you were insane...trust me wacko.gif


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post Nov 23 2004, 04:55 PM
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eh, I've seen crazier o_O
(nice avatar, though ^-^)


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post Nov 23 2004, 05:30 PM
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There are crazier things than that in the world. But you are doing quite well.


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Lord of darness
post Nov 24 2004, 03:31 PM
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Well I have crazyer and I know I am crazy becouse others tell me I am and also people tend not to think on the same Level I do....

as for the story it's already handed in becouse I didnt come back here after I posted this. I wanted something funny for my german fairy tail project and I thought this would be good.

As for the killing spree would it really be school apropriot if I added a lot of detailed. Like him Decapitaing Ranold and dont get me started on just do it......... lets leave it there.


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I am the Pocky Ninja Master |>34|2 |)4 |\|!\|\J4
My new minoin is MATA I snached him first YAH!!!
A member of Mr Snaffleburger Death Cult
I have a acid bunny named fluffy the distroyer
I have a Vadka Imp named Jenifer she give me tasty jucies and sell well (yummm Vadka)
I peadged to ish go ish

click for pic (sorry, the pic's a little too big...debs)
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post Nov 24 2004, 04:46 PM
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meh/10

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Lord of darness
post Dec 14 2004, 11:43 AM
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I'm bringing this back up for ideas becouse the story you read was just the first draft now I have to exspand onthe story and add pictures. I will have a fun time with that last one lol.


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DDR MASTER
I am the Pocky Ninja Master |>34|2 |)4 |\|!\|\J4
My new minoin is MATA I snached him first YAH!!!
A member of Mr Snaffleburger Death Cult
I have a acid bunny named fluffy the distroyer
I have a Vadka Imp named Jenifer she give me tasty jucies and sell well (yummm Vadka)
I peadged to ish go ish

click for pic (sorry, the pic's a little too big...debs)
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