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bryden42
post Sep 23 2005, 04:18 PM
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Moth,
Moth,
F**k Off


ok so it isnt very long, or very clever but when my friend came out with this after we had watched a moth for about an hour repeatedly bang its head against a bulb assuming that it was heading for the moon it seemed apt, topical and very funny.
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post Sep 25 2005, 07:34 PM
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It should be noted that (...) is the Japanese instant messaging way to convey stunned or annoyed silence. You may decide which for yourself. Were you and friend drunk or tired at the time, by any chance? laugh.gif


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post Sep 25 2005, 10:27 PM
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QUOTE (bryden42 @ Sep 23 2005, 11:18 AM)
Moth,
Moth,
F**k Off
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*sniff*

I love how you managed to capture the emotions, it brought a tear to my eye.

Really.


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post Sep 27 2005, 05:53 AM
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I seem to recall that we were a little stoned. which would explain a lot I imagine.


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post Sep 27 2005, 05:54 AM
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I love how you managed to capture the emotions, it brought a tear to my eye.


I know, its so emotive biggrin.gif


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post Sep 27 2005, 09:33 AM
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Ah, I feel that the poem is an analogy of the futility of the human condition, or perhaps
in it's simplicity, it shows that we, like the humble moth, are beset on all sides by barriers both real and of the soul...

Bryden-san, I thank you for your gift.

*slumps onto sofa and contemplates the ineffable... and his belly-button.*
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post Sep 27 2005, 01:00 PM
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Ah Matthew-San, The gift is freely given. Indeed the deepest mysteries of the barriers between the physical and the meta physical are explored here, Is the Moth happy with its lot or is it railing against the futility of its existence? these are the questions I seek answers to....... now bellybuttons, thats deep man! biggrin.gif


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post Sep 27 2005, 01:07 PM
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It's an inny...
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post Sep 27 2005, 04:15 PM
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- Doctor doctor, I keep thinking I'm a moth!

- You'll be wanting the next door along, I'm a dentist.

- I know.

- So why are you in here then?

- Your light was on.


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post Sep 27 2005, 05:51 PM
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*flings poo at Mata for telling a joke that my five-year-old cousin considers the height of good humor*
If you were stoned, I understand the whole situation. Don't ever combine poetry and drugs again, for the outcome makes my brain hurt. tongue.gif


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post Sep 28 2005, 06:13 AM
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I dont think i've done drugs in about 12 years. it was a phase that we went through as teens. I dont think i ve done poetry since either, which is also a good thing biggrin.gif

am i a vogon?


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post Sep 28 2005, 11:19 AM
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I think it was about two hundreds lines too short for Vogon poetry.

And what's wrong with that joke? That's a classic! biggrin.gif


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post Oct 1 2005, 04:52 AM
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QUOTE (Mata @ Sep 28 2005, 07:19 AM)
I think it was about two hundreds lines too short for Vogon poetry.

And what's wrong with that joke? That's a classic! biggrin.gif
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Just because something is a classic doesn't mean that it's good. laugh.gif My entire literature course last year would be an excellent example. Just because a book was written over a century ago does not mean that it's good, Satan-teacher-of-death. mad.gif Grrrrrr... I don't mean to rant, but the teacher was obsessed with saying that anything classic ought to be our favorite book of all time. Nearly all of my favorite books were written less than fifty years ago. tongue.gif Needless to say, I didn't get on too well with that teacher.


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post Oct 1 2005, 10:41 AM
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*flicks lint onto carpet*


hmmm belly button lint, next to toe jam thats one of my favourite things, where do you think belly lint comes from?, Same place as the mystical white dog turds?


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post Oct 1 2005, 03:07 PM
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*Likes both the joke and the poem*

*Does not like belly button lint*

Doesn't belly button lint come from bits of fluff rubbed off of clothing? Or is that just what they want us to think? tongue.gif

*Surreptitiously increases post count* >.> <.<


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post Oct 1 2005, 04:20 PM
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Maybe we should ask Drum?
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C'mon people haven't any of you just watched a moth bang itself into a lightbulb repeatedly and found yourself so inspired...you know, just like you had a reason to live again?


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post Oct 2 2005, 01:15 PM
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I can't say that I have.

TWG! Very long time no see. Where've you been hiding?


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QUOTE (The.Wheezing.Ghost @ Oct 1 2005, 10:55 PM)
C'mon people haven't any of you just watched a moth bang itself into a lightbulb repeatedly and found yourself so inspired...you know, just like you had a reason to live again?
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tongue.gif I've watched a spider build its web, and slugs crawl along, and frogs hop.... but no moths. They tend to run into me instead x.x;
Bugs are fun.

I was rather amused (and angry....) about a yellow jacket stinging me and watching as it tried to get its stinger back out. It kind of flailed around and it seemed to me like it was confused as to why its butt was stuck in my leg....


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post Oct 9 2005, 02:39 PM
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My young cousin stuck a moth up my nose once. Let me tell you those things stink and the smell just sticks and when you think about it you can smell it again....Damn it.


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post Oct 9 2005, 05:11 PM
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I once stepped on a yellow jacket in bare feet. Don't ever do that or your foot will hurt and turn alarming colors. tongue.gif


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