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 Mar 17 2004, 08:49 PM
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 Remorseless posting machine  Group: Moderators Posts: 5,749 Joined: 19-July 03 From: Bloody London Member No.: 466 Gender: Male  |
short lines
make everything meaningful rhyme schemes are for losers scansion? meter? fuck off i'm original notice the lower case? that's originality, bitch anyway blood and also angst death and similar sentiments grief settles over me like a dark shroud of darkness and grief when will i find a girlfriend who shares my love for vampire: the masquerade? doomed to agony and loneliness and did i mention grief? yes grief also there is nobody like me in the world nope so alone and yet interestingly unique in a sort of anne rice way like everyone hates me but because i'm so cool and secretly they all want to be like me plus i'm a vampire no, really stop laughing i'll suck your fucking blood oh man this poem is good so much emotion and grief i'm so creative that must be why everyone hates me i'm going to cry alone now i had to tell you that or you might not pay any attention to me goodbye cruel world -------------------- Every sort of expert knowledge and every inquiry, and similarly every action and undertaking, seems to seek some good. Because of that, people are right to affirm that the good is 'that which all things seek'...
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Mar 17 2004, 08:51 PM
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 Transitive Axis Group: New Members Posts: 286 Joined: 7-March 04 From: London, somewhere Member No.: 995 |
harsh but fair
You showed Them the light of which they end without the poem above shows how creativity dies in poetry threads like a cloud turned to rain how much more crap will people write before they learn how to rhyme  glad someone else feels the same....
-------------------- 'Even the wisest among you is only a confusion and hybrid of plant and phantom'
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Mar 21 2004, 05:39 PM
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 Bleeg? Group: New Members Posts: 374 Joined: 21-March 04 From: OH MY GOD WHERE AM I?!?!?! Member No.: 1,021 |
Hey dude that was a good poem...
-------------------- >(|||> Pround owner of the Uber-carrot! Ph34r it! Come closer. . . so I can slap the sh*t out of you! . . . do I LOOK like a friggin people person? Bumper stickers are so lame. . . Bumper STICKS are where it's at! You should duct tape a stick to your bumper and be like me!
. . . I'm hearing voices but all they do is complain. . . What if I had a mustard-drenched cucumber tied to my leg and I did not want my pants to get dirty? Ya better checkety-check yourself before ya wreckety-wreck yourself! Once you finally create something original, someone comes along and steals it. . . not to say that's a BAD thing. . . |
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Mar 21 2004, 06:04 PM
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 Took this grammar! Group: Established Members Posts: 3,246 Joined: 23-March 03 From: Saskatoon Member No.: 165 Gender: Female |
I am rolling on the floor laughing my proverbial ass off as I type. I'm not sure it's possible but your poem inspires such impossibilities
-------------------- Everytime the blue screen went out, Stan the weatherman suffered an existential crisis.
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Mar 28 2004, 01:16 PM
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 Light On The Surface Group: Moderators Posts: 4,370 Joined: 4-March 03 From: Banjomouse Record House Member No.: 91 Gender: Male |
i prefer haiku -
the harsh syllabic rules fuel my angst and rage That was very difficult for me to write. It took almost all of my fingers. -------------------- the end is nice |
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Mar 28 2004, 01:28 PM
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 Has gone untreated for blurriness since 1986 Group: Established Members Posts: 1,921 Joined: 3-August 03 Member No.: 505 Gender: Secret |
And you still missed out a syllable on the second line.
*Disapproving look* |
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Mar 28 2004, 02:05 PM
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Light On The Surface Group: Moderators Posts: 4,370 Joined: 4-March 03 From: Banjomouse Record House Member No.: 91 Gender: Male |
QUOTE (Polocrunch @ Mar 28 2004, 01:27 PM) And you still missed out a syllable on the second line. *Disapproving look* I don't kow-tow to your fascist conventions, damnit. I'm a poet. ... Damn... -------------------- the end is nice |
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Mar 29 2004, 02:10 PM
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 Duck Hunter S Thompson Group: Admin Posts: 3,417 Joined: 28-February 03 From: Lovely, rainy, Seattle Member No.: 71 Gender: Male |
The Goth Stares Into the Wardrobe, by Jonman
to the tune of the Lone Ranger music Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack. Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack. Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack. Blacky-Blaaaaaack, Black-black-Black. Black, black, black-black, black-black black-black, black-black, black-black-black Black, black, black-black, black-black black-black, black-black, black-blackblaaaack BLACK-BLACK. BLACKBLACK-BLACK, BLACKBLACK-BLACK. BLACK BLACK. -------------------- Nearly two years in - about time for a new AV
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Mar 29 2004, 02:57 PM
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 Member Group: New Members Posts: 23 Joined: 27-March 04 From: http://www.rpgreality.com/forums/ Member No.: 1,038 |
*falls out of chair laughing* oh dear god... thats whorrable ... keep em coming
-------------------- you are one of us... one of us... one of us
Run away from all your boredom Run away from all your whoredom and wave Your worries, and cares, goodbye All it takes is one decision A lot of guts, a little vision to wave Your worries, and cares goodbye It's a maze for rats to try It's a race, a race for rats A race for rats to die It's a race, a race for rats A race for rats to die |
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Mar 29 2004, 03:01 PM
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 Kiefer > Jason Group: Admin Posts: 9,698 Joined: 26-February 03 From: UK Member No.: 51 Gender: Female |
**tears up from the deepness of Jonman's poetry**
--------------------  Being Pimped By Aries Since 2003 |
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Mar 29 2004, 04:28 PM
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 living in your basement, eating your candy hearts Group: Established Members Posts: 3,418 Joined: 23-February 04 From: cloud cuckoo land Member No.: 959 Gender: Female |
QUOTE (Jonman @ Mar 29 2004, 08:09 AM) The Goth Stares Into the Wardrobe, by Jonman to the tune of the Lone Ranger music Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack. Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack. Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack. Blacky-Blaaaaaack, Black-black-Black. Black, black, black-black, black-black black-black, black-black, black-black-black Black, black, black-black, black-black black-black, black-black, black-blackblaaaack BLACK-BLACK. BLACKBLACK-BLACK, BLACKBLACK-BLACK. BLACK BLACK. HA! Exactly why I don't think I'm "gothic". I have colors in there. And a LOT of blue jeans. Poem by anonymous: See the happy moron, He doesn't give a damn. I wish I were a moron, My God, perhaps I am. -------------------- Being corrupted by candice since 2004
teal and orange is the way forward |
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Mar 29 2004, 06:21 PM
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 ever-hopeful since 2003 Group: Moderators Posts: 6,037 Joined: 27-February 03 From: Midwest US Member No.: 54 Gender: Secret |
Commie is my hero. As is Jonman.
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Mar 29 2004, 06:27 PM
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 I've been brainwashed Group: Admin Posts: 4,120 Joined: 10-August 03 From: Cheshire Member No.: 526 Gender: Secret |
The German Guns. by Baldrick
Boom boom boom boom Boom boom boom BOOM BOOM, BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM couldn't resist!
-------------------- How would you feel about life if Death was your older sister? You're only young once but you can stay immature indefinetly!!!!
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Mar 30 2004, 03:52 AM
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 Many fools can now anticipate pity! Group: Moderators Posts: 2,296 Joined: 26-February 03 From: East Coast US Member No.: 40 Gender: Female |
*bows to commie*
you never cease to amaze me oh great one. -------------------- Proud Cronie since Feb 26, 2003
"When women act like women, they are accused of being inferior. When women act like human beings, they are accused of behaving like men." —Simone de Beauvoir And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom. -Anais Nin No matter that patriotism is too often the refuge of scoundrels. Dissent, rebellion, and all-around hell-raising remain the true duty of patriots. -Barbara Ehrenreich live journal |
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Mar 30 2004, 05:41 PM
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 This space intentionally left blank Group: Admin Posts: 2,368 Joined: 30-March 03 From: Venta Belgarum Member No.: 203 Gender: Male |
Not only is this pretty much the antithesis of the topic, it isn't even original. Or mine. I'm posting it anyway though. Nyer
 Spring has sprung, The grass is grizz, I wonder where the birdies is. Relevant? Me? Never! -------------------- We are at war with Eastasia. We have always been at war with Eastasia. We were never at war with Eurasia. Eurasia is our ally.
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Mar 30 2004, 06:51 PM
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Engrish Ranguage Student Group: Established Members Posts: 3,363 Joined: 27-May 03 From: Tamworth Member No.: 338 Gender: Female |
QUOTE (Jonman @ Mar 29 2004, 02:09 PM) The Goth Stares Into the Wardrobe, by Jonman to the tune of the Lone Ranger music Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack. Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack. Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack. Blacky-Blaaaaaack, Black-black-Black. Black, black, black-black, black-black black-black, black-black, black-black-black Black, black, black-black, black-black black-black, black-black, black-blackblaaaack BLACK-BLACK. BLACKBLACK-BLACK, BLACKBLACK-BLACK. BLACK BLACK. That is an incredibly brilliant poem. QUOTE The German Guns. by Baldrick Boom boom boom boom Boom boom boom BOOM BOOM, BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM and that's a classic
-------------------- Go Go Gadget WeeJ!
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Sep 12 2004, 09:19 PM
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 I'm attracted by the potential for reckless abuse of power. Group: Established Members Posts: 2,683 Joined: 7-May 04 From: Viewtiful World Member No.: 1,105 Gender: Male |
Hee hee hee hee hee hee hee!
I declare these two poems to be the top two pieces of literature EVER WRITTEN. Oh, god that's funny. -------------------- I'm just a Viewtiful Girl living in a Viewtiful World.
Henshin a-go-go, baby. I swear to God, the above post was not intended to incite flame wars or to offend you. |
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Sep 12 2004, 11:01 PM
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 'Trouble Down Pit' now online! Group: Admin Posts: 10,141 Joined: 22-February 03 From: Southern UK Member No.: 1 Gender: Male |
Ah, goth poetry. Here's a golden oldie from the forums. This was posted in what I think may have been the first poetry thread, back on 27th Feb, 2003:
Like an obsidian moon, So soon, My soul, Is like a hole. Or an empty bowl. But not like a mole. Except that it is blind, Other similarities, You will not find, Between my soul, And a mole. Except that it is also black, Deep black, And dark. And comes out at night. And digs up lawns. Damn, I really need to animate that someday. -------------------- Trouble Down Pit: Still updated every Monday and Friday
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Sep 12 2004, 11:24 PM
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 Shut up, noob! Group: Established Members Posts: 5,760 Joined: 7-June 03 From: The Dina, No Flo Member No.: 367 Gender: Male |
You could make like a cartoon badger reciting his poem. I can hear your voice reading it aloud.
-------------------- With every breath...and all that I am...I will make a stand...until the end. |
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Sep 14 2004, 06:55 PM
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Technically a giant, intellectual midget. Group: Established Members Posts: 4,319 Joined: 29-March 03 From: Enger-land Member No.: 197 Gender: Transgender |
i dunno, i think it'd make a rather cracking short LGG animation...shortish...well bastard long and complicated knowing you mata
-------------------- He's a freak of nature, but we love him so.
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Sep 15 2004, 12:11 AM
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'Trouble Down Pit' now online! Group: Admin Posts: 10,141 Joined: 22-February 03 From: Southern UK Member No.: 1 Gender: Male |
What is it that you're suggesting, Pat? That I can't seem to resist making things overly long and complicated? I mean... I only thought about doing a series of images about the evolution of the sheep species in the Brother Black Sheep animation for a few days before I realised I could do the same thing with about 15 words...
-------------------- Trouble Down Pit: Still updated every Monday and Friday
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Sep 15 2004, 01:15 AM
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 Empowe(red) Group: Established Members Posts: 1,588 Joined: 1-October 03 From: New York Member No.: 614 Gender: Female |
*rolls on floor laughing herself to tears*
haha yes, but now you need to see my poem of greatness. How deep and dark my poem is. Ready for it? Right! Here it comes!: The end. See, my poem is really nothing, fathom that. Wow, deep - huh? I mean, people write a lot of nothings so I figured that I'd just like totally beat them to it and like just like totally right like uh nothing. Like ya know whatever -------------------- Squeaky swings and tall grass
The longest shadows ever cast The water's warm and children swim And we frolicked about in our summer skin Where I roam... |
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Sep 17 2004, 07:03 PM
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I've been brainwashed Group: Admin Posts: 4,120 Joined: 10-August 03 From: Cheshire Member No.: 526 Gender: Secret |
This was inspired on IRC by another forum member
I would die for my Love, But it's to much effort with this Teenage angst weighing me down, Woe is me Woe is me And any way I dont got no one anyway! 
-------------------- How would you feel about life if Death was your older sister? You're only young once but you can stay immature indefinetly!!!!
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Sep 17 2004, 07:37 PM
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Technically a giant, intellectual midget. Group: Established Members Posts: 4,319 Joined: 29-March 03 From: Enger-land Member No.: 197 Gender: Transgender |
QUOTE (Mata @ Sep 15 2004, 01:11 AM) What is it that you're suggesting, Pat?  I'm suggesting that your poem could be used to make a filler animation for when you're making big new ones....in fact, you could make a whole series of them, her (LGG) standing in a spot light with a mic, a beret and a pair of sun glasses with some arty farty bongo drums type thing, I'd like to hear what sues could make of jonman's one and the great thing is, the animation wouldn't have to be anything spectacular...well it would be good, but there's nothing esspecially complicated about sarah standing in front of a mic....as long as you don't insist on lip syncing it and, what's better is that you could get forumites to submit them to save you the creative hassle, go on, you know you want to 
-------------------- He's a freak of nature, but we love him so.
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Sep 17 2004, 07:44 PM
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Remorseless posting machine Group: Moderators Posts: 5,749 Joined: 19-July 03 From: Bloody London Member No.: 466 Gender: Male |
Oh my, this old thing...ah, it amused me at the time.
The mental image of Sarah onstage with a beret and a pair of bongos is somehow fundamentally right. -------------------- Every sort of expert knowledge and every inquiry, and similarly every action and undertaking, seems to seek some good. Because of that, people are right to affirm that the good is 'that which all things seek'...
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