Hello! I recently wrote a short story. I got my inspiration from The Wishing Game in the Daft forum! I would appreciate it if I could have some constructive criticism on it.

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Wow, that was really good and the end was really sad aswell. I was just wondering, are boys just naturally like that to their friends, because I would never do anything like let my friend be beaten up even if they really offended me...

Normal people wouldn't let their friends be beaten up, but Kevin was going on a power trip.

wow.

darn, I envy your writing powers.

Thanks.