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You deny me freshmaker?!
OK, so I wrote this about 4 years ago with the idea of becomig a world famous lryicist. Feel free to use it if your in a band, just give me a little credit where its due. If you want any more song lryics just email me.

UNKnown entity

He stands alone in every crowd,
To all around unseen,
He lives his life from day to day,
seeking an impossible dream.
He's trapped by those around him,
shunned by those he seeks,
in a place that's always silent,
He's a voice that always speaks,

He's the unknown entity,
The one that cannot fit,
He’s an isolated mystery,
trapped in societies pit.

People think he's heartless,
They say he's made of stone,
but they don't see the way he feels,
he's still just flesh and bone,
The people that he's talked to,
have made him feel a fool,
and no ones wants to listen,
when the speaker isn't cool,

He's the unknown entity,
he's part of no ones team,
no one ever notices
if he's gone from the scene,

But he still thinks that he's O.K.,
He stands out from the crowd,
He lives to go against the grain,
do things that aren't allowed.
He bends the rules to breaking,
then stops before they snap,
finds ways to beat new systems,
never stops to look back,

He's the unknown entity
The breaker of the trend
He's a governmental misery
who sees societies end.
tv with legs
hmmm, i dont really nkow what to make of it. i guess it could be lyrics. but it doesnt always have to be really long. it could just be a short phrase. nonetheless, i think its its good but not great. keep it up.
Moosh
Sounds good, you could put that to a metal soundtrack and it would work. Keep it up.
Astarael
Ickle Cheesy Snoog-a-Boo is right. Some metal might be nice as a background. Keep working and practicing. Part of it does sound a bit emo, but some of the rest of it is quite good.
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