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Dreams On Hiatus
Hello! I recently wrote a short story. I got my inspiration from The Wishing Game in the Daft forum! I would appreciate it if I could have some constructive criticism on it.

Here is the Link

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I_am_the_best
Wow, that was really good and the end was really sad aswell. I was just wondering, are boys just naturally like that to their friends, because I would never do anything like let my friend be beaten up even if they really offended me...
Dreams On Hiatus
QUOTE (I_am_the_best @ Jan 13 2005, 01:45 PM)
Wow, that was really good and the end was really sad aswell. I was just wondering, are boys just naturally like that to their friends, because I would never do anything like let my friend be beaten up even if they really offended me...
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Normal people wouldn't let their friends be beaten up, but Kevin was going on a power trip.
voices_in_my_head
wow.

darn, I envy your writing powers.
Dreams On Hiatus
Thanks. happy.gif
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