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MonochromeRainbow
Hold yourself
Still
At the top
You fought to be here
You dragged
Your reluctant body
To the top
And now you stand
Here, poised, magnificent
Still.

Don't move.
Savour this still second
This moment without movement
Slowly
Carefully
Spread your arms
You're on top of the world.
Still

The whole world looks in awe
At you
You who have defied gravity
Climbed to the top of the world
Hold yourself
Still.

Another moment
Defying gravity
The relax
Let gravity once again
Encircle you
Relax
Remaining still
And then, let go.

any opinions?

also, am i allowed to plug my new creative writing website on here?
Vegetarian for life
wow, thats amazing blink.gif smile.gif
snooodlysnoosnoosnoodle
I like it!

To advertise your website you can go here: http://www.matazone.co.uk/forums/index.php?showtopic=6851 but I'm sure there's no harm in you putting the link in here too if you want.
MonochromeRainbow
thanks both of you!

put the link in my sig, also in the thread you suggested, snoo.

sent the poem off the other day, just got to cross my fingers now.
saucy_tara
Beautiful, evoked a lot of imagery for me, that did smile.gif
MonochromeRainbow
glad you liked smile.gif
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