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Dreams On Hiatus
Azaelia's Sorrow: Observation of Drajhil (<-- btw that is pronounced dra-ZHEEL)

Beyond the fields and wint'ry plains;
Beyond the boundaries in which the soul contains;
Among the heavens and bright dreams anew;
In each and every detail; each drop of dew:

I see the laughter and life you give;
I see in my hands a metaphorical sieve;
In each grain of sand that forever falls;
I see the pain that surrounds your halls...

Beyond the earth and its firey core;
Beneath the sea and its ancient shore;
Encircled with light of the angel's wings;
Wearing the crown of the heavenly kings:

I see your wings fold 'round your heart;
I hear you whisper your words to depart;
Your search of faith you must begin;
You cannot escape; you're bound from within...

I got the idea from a story that Trina and I are writing.

Let me know what you think... ph34r.gif
Dreams On Hiatus
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