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Gothymothy girl
Horror

I hear a scream. Is it mine?
My throat is ripping, bleeding.
Why, why? My blood...
I can taste it.
It is spilling from between my lips,
Coating my teeth and shirt.
Stop screaming, whoever you are.
Why are you screaming?!
My throat hurts and more blood is dripping from my mouth.
It cannot be me who is screaming, I don't know why...
I am falling, falling.
My bleeding throat is a burden of relief that I can feel running in my veins.
Gothymothy girl
PLEASE GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK, IF ITS BAD I DON'T CARE JUST TELL ME FOR FELLUMS SAKE!
altehase
Very horrific and thought provoking at the same time. I heard similar lines from a monkey once. It was a punishment gone wrong. Damn those TV show...damn them all to hell.

...I like your work:)


Der Altehase
Gothymothy girl
Thank you for replying SO MUCH! it kinda means a lot. Im glad monkeys enjoy my work as well. THANK YOU KIND PERSON!
Dolty McDaft
nobody knows the idiot hidden inside
of course, all of your happy person poems suck, so power to the goth poems!
everyone loves to hear about blood



...I am a terrible poet, by the way, and envy all who can do it better than me
Gothymothy girl
So you envy me, Jess? goodie. It makes me feel special. And you write good stories so I envy you on that matter.
Gothymothy girl
Lemme guess, you're saying something like, "HAHAHAHA! YOU LOSER!!" right?
LoLo
You find this interesting HOW!?
Gothymothy girl
Do you mean the poem or the other posts?
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