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the prespective of an eternity
by Thor

between your last breath
and your next
can seem like eternities
when the void
is filled with the
of something
now missing
haveing been
violently extracted
that still extists
even though you know
you feel it there
some say time heals all pain
and all things
it might just be
a matter
of the number
of eternities
to count between breaths
Wow. That's really beautiful. In a painful sort of way...
Yes, that is beautiful and I feel it has meaning, which it obviously does for you too, but sometimes when you put your own feelings on paper they don't always work when other people read them - but that does smile.gif

(As you can probably tell from that rambling, ineloquent reply, I am not of a poetic nature!!)
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