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> Just Remember, A creative writing death extravaganza..more or less
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post May 9 2006, 07:55 PM
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Izzy
post May 9 2006, 08:22 PM
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WOW. That's really good. There's just one part is didn't get. When you said
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They were both gone, they had both hurt me, and I had destroyed them both. I never even gave them the chance to apologize. I knew that they would have if given the chance, but my jealousy took over and now I never get to see them smile again

What did you mean by they? I thought the girl only killed Billie?

So, do you know how the rest of the story's going to continue? Will the girl have a run-in with the police, or forever live a life of guilt, or what? I'm excited to read the rest . smile.gif


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