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CommieBastard
post Mar 17 2004, 08:49 PM
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short lines
make everything meaningful
rhyme schemes are for losers
scansion? meter? fuck off
i'm original
notice the lower case?
that's originality, bitch
anyway
blood
and also angst
death
and similar sentiments
grief settles over me like a dark shroud of darkness and grief
when will i find a girlfriend who shares my love for vampire: the masquerade?
doomed to agony
and loneliness
and did i mention grief?
yes
grief
also there is nobody like me in the world
nope
so alone and yet interestingly unique
in a sort of anne rice way
like everyone hates me but because i'm so cool
and secretly they all want to be like me
plus i'm a vampire
no, really
stop laughing
i'll suck your fucking blood
oh man this poem is good
so much emotion
and grief
i'm so creative
that must be why everyone hates me
i'm going to cry alone now
i had to tell you that or you might not pay any attention to me
goodbye
cruel world


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post Mar 17 2004, 08:51 PM
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harsh but fair
You showed Them
the light of which
they end without

the poem above shows
how creativity dies
in
poetry
threads
like
a cloud turned to rain

how much more crap
will people write
before they learn
how to rhyme

biggrin.gif glad someone else feels the same....


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post Mar 21 2004, 05:39 PM
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Hey dude that was a good poem...


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What if I had a mustard-drenched cucumber tied to my leg and I did not want my pants to get dirty? Ya better checkety-check yourself before ya wreckety-wreck yourself! Once you finally create something original, someone comes along and steals it. . . not to say that's a BAD thing. . .
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Jaq
post Mar 21 2004, 06:04 PM
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I am rolling on the floor laughing my proverbial ass off as I type. I'm not sure it's possible but your poem inspires such impossibilities


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Industrial Kybos...
post Mar 28 2004, 01:16 PM
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i prefer haiku -
the harsh syllabic rules
fuel my angst and rage

That was very difficult for me to write. It took almost all of my fingers.


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post Mar 28 2004, 01:28 PM
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And you still missed out a syllable on the second line.

*Disapproving look*
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post Mar 28 2004, 02:05 PM
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QUOTE (Polocrunch @ Mar 28 2004, 01:27 PM)
And you still missed out a syllable on the second line.

*Disapproving look*

I don't kow-tow to your fascist conventions, damnit. I'm a poet.

...

Damn...


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post Mar 29 2004, 02:10 PM
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The Goth Stares Into the Wardrobe, by Jonman

to the tune of the Lone Ranger music

Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack.
Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack.
Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack.
Blacky-Blaaaaaack, Black-black-Black.

Black, black, black-black, black-black
black-black, black-black, black-black-black
Black, black, black-black, black-black
black-black, black-black, black-blackblaaaack
BLACK-BLACK.
BLACKBLACK-BLACK,
BLACKBLACK-BLACK.
BLACK BLACK.


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post Mar 29 2004, 02:57 PM
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*falls out of chair laughing* oh dear god... thats whorrable ... keep em coming


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Your worries, and cares goodbye

It's a maze for rats to try
It's a race, a race for rats
A race for rats to die
It's a race, a race for rats
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post Mar 29 2004, 03:01 PM
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**tears up from the deepness of Jonman's poetry**


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gothictheysay
post Mar 29 2004, 04:28 PM
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QUOTE (Jonman @ Mar 29 2004, 08:09 AM)
The Goth Stares Into the Wardrobe, by Jonman

to the tune of the Lone Ranger music

Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack.
Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack.
Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack.
Blacky-Blaaaaaack, Black-black-Black.

Black, black, black-black, black-black
black-black, black-black, black-black-black
Black, black, black-black, black-black
black-black, black-black, black-blackblaaaack
BLACK-BLACK.
BLACKBLACK-BLACK,
BLACKBLACK-BLACK.
BLACK BLACK.

HA! Exactly why I don't think I'm "gothic". I have colors in there. And a LOT of blue jeans.

Poem by anonymous:
See the happy moron,
He doesn't give a damn.
I wish I were a moron,
My God, perhaps I am.


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post Mar 29 2004, 06:21 PM
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Commie is my hero. As is Jonman.
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Cath Sparrow
post Mar 29 2004, 06:27 PM
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The German Guns. by Baldrick

Boom boom boom boom
Boom boom boom
BOOM BOOM, BOOM BOOM
BOOM BOOM BOOM


couldn't resist! biggrin.gif


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post Mar 30 2004, 03:52 AM
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*bows to commie*
you never cease to amaze me oh great one.


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post Mar 30 2004, 05:41 PM
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Not only is this pretty much the antithesis of the topic, it isn't even original. Or mine. I'm posting it anyway though. Nyer tongue.gif

Spring has sprung,
The grass is grizz,
I wonder where the birdies is.

Relevant? Me? Never!


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post Mar 30 2004, 06:51 PM
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QUOTE (Jonman @ Mar 29 2004, 02:09 PM)
The Goth Stares Into the Wardrobe, by Jonman

to the tune of the Lone Ranger music

Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack.
Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack.
Blackity-Blackity-BlackBlackBlack.
Blacky-Blaaaaaack, Black-black-Black.

Black, black, black-black, black-black
black-black, black-black, black-black-black
Black, black, black-black, black-black
black-black, black-black, black-blackblaaaack
BLACK-BLACK.
BLACKBLACK-BLACK,
BLACKBLACK-BLACK.
BLACK BLACK.

That is an incredibly brilliant poem.

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The German Guns. by Baldrick

Boom boom boom boom
Boom boom boom
BOOM BOOM, BOOM BOOM
BOOM BOOM BOOM


and that's a classic biggrin.gif


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post Sep 12 2004, 09:19 PM
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Hee hee hee hee hee hee hee!

I declare these two poems to be the top two pieces of literature EVER WRITTEN. Oh, god that's funny.


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post Sep 12 2004, 11:01 PM
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Ah, goth poetry. Here's a golden oldie from the forums. This was posted in what I think may have been the first poetry thread, back on 27th Feb, 2003:

Like an obsidian moon,
So soon,
My soul,
Is like a hole.
Or an empty bowl.
But not like a mole.
Except that it is blind,
Other similarities,
You will not find,
Between my soul,
And a mole.
Except that it is also black,
Deep black,
And dark.
And comes out at night.
And digs up lawns.

Damn, I really need to animate that someday.


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post Sep 12 2004, 11:24 PM
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You could make like a cartoon badger reciting his poem. I can hear your voice reading it aloud.


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post Sep 14 2004, 06:55 PM
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i dunno, i think it'd make a rather cracking short LGG animation...shortish...well bastard long and complicated knowing you mata tongue.gif


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post Sep 15 2004, 12:11 AM
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What is it that you're suggesting, Pat? That I can't seem to resist making things overly long and complicated? I mean... I only thought about doing a series of images about the evolution of the sheep species in the Brother Black Sheep animation for a few days before I realised I could do the same thing with about 15 words...


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post Sep 15 2004, 01:15 AM
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*rolls on floor laughing herself to tears*

haha yes, but now you need to see my poem of greatness. How deep and dark my poem is. Ready for it? Right! Here it comes!:









The end.


See, my poem is really nothing, fathom that. Wow, deep - huh? I mean, people write a lot of nothings so I figured that I'd just like totally beat them to it and like just like totally right like uh nothing.

Like ya know

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post Sep 17 2004, 07:03 PM
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This was inspired on IRC by another forum member

I would die for my Love,
But it's to much effort with this Teenage angst weighing me down,
Woe is me
Woe is me
And any way I dont got no one anyway!

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post Sep 17 2004, 07:37 PM
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QUOTE (Mata @ Sep 15 2004, 01:11 AM)
What is it that you're suggesting, Pat?
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I'm suggesting that your poem could be used to make a filler animation for when you're making big new ones....in fact, you could make a whole series of them, her (LGG) standing in a spot light with a mic, a beret and a pair of sun glasses with some arty farty bongo drums type thing, I'd like to hear what sues could make of jonman's one and the great thing is, the animation wouldn't have to be anything spectacular...well it would be good, but there's nothing esspecially complicated about sarah standing in front of a mic....as long as you don't insist on lip syncing it and, what's better is that you could get forumites to submit them to save you the creative hassle, go on, you know you want to wink.gif tongue.gif


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post Sep 17 2004, 07:44 PM
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Oh my, this old thing...ah, it amused me at the time.

The mental image of Sarah onstage with a beret and a pair of bongos is somehow fundamentally right.


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